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1. Name of Dynasty, Location of the Capital City , and Map of the Territory it Controlled 2. Name of Founder of the Dynasty, the Dates he Ruled and a Picture of Him 3. Approximate population of China under the Dynasty (You copied this from Period 1) 4.  Major Economic Activity, imports, exports, trade (You copied this from Period 1) 5.  Artistic Achievements including Pictures of Artwork (Artists name? Painting Name? Other forms of art?) 6. A list of 5 important historical events that happened to the Dynasty with dates. Include at least two images corresponding to the historical events. 7. A short Description of how the Dynasty ended 8. A list of references showing where you located your information 9. A 60-90 second podcast explanation of why the Dynasty is the best in Chinese History. Complements: 1) You have a lot of information that is well organized.   2)  You met many of the requirement of the checklist Areas for Improvement: 1) Plagiarism will get you a zero! It is bad enough to copy a website, but to copy another group’s wiki takes it to another level. I realize you were pressed for time, but shortcuts like this are not appropriate and will result in a serious lowering of your grade.   2)  Everything is left justified. Use the Center and Right justify buttons to develop a more pleasing design. 3) Outside of the Plagiarized work from Period 1, there are not resources listed. Where did you find you information?   4)  You failed to include several items from the checklist. Pace yourself to complete the entire assignment. All in all, I am very disappointed in the blatant copying. I do not know what is worse, the fact that you copied or that you did not think you would get caught. On its own this wiki was coming along nicely, not only is the copying wrong it was unnecessary. The list of Emperors is too long and breaks the continuity of the page. Be more selective in what information you include. Grade for Imperial China Wiki: It would have been a C+, but since you plagiarized it is a D-.
 * List the Names and Dates of the other emperors as well
 * ( The list is good but it is too long and overwhelms your wiki. Be selective with the information you include.)